On Monday we had Cyber smart with James, and Room nine had to improve a good comment into a powerful and strong comment. We did this by making sure that all our punctuation was correct, that our comment is positive, thoughtful and helpful. We tried to leave a question in our comment so we could make connections with the blogger. I also told the blogger about what they could improve on so their posts will be better. After lots of editing and checking with buddies we finally finished our comment. Have a look at mine. Make sure you leave a comment on my learning so you can show me your improved commenting skills.
